Many parents ask us what the fastest way their child can improve their writing. While we firmly believe there are no shortcuts to becoming a truly effective and skilled writer, there are some things students can incorporate into their writing to help take it to the next level more efficiently. Like with anything trying to be mastered, the key to success lies in hard work and repetition. Practicing these skills regularly will help your child reach their educational goals.
This article will be the first in a series of articles that will focus on skills suited for different types of writing. This week, waxaanu diirada saari doonaa talooyinka qoraalka ee qeexan.
Tilmaamaha Qorista Sharaxaada:
Qoritaanka qeexitaanku waa qaab farshaxan oo run ah, iyada oo ujeeddadeedu ay tahay in ay sawir ku abuurto maskaxda akhristayaasha. Qofku ma sheegi karo sheeko ku saabsan ficil iyo wadahadal keliya, oo qofku maanso ku soo gudbin karo macne iyo dareen qoto dheer isagoon erayadiisa sawir ku bixin.
Mid ka mid ah dariiqo awood leh oo aad ugu fiicnaan lahayd sharraxaadda ayaa ah in lagu daro sifooyin iyo fal-celin meel kasta oo suurtagal ah. For example, Haddii ilmahaagu qorayo sheeko waxa laga yaabaa inay qoraan wax la mid ah:
"Harry dibadda ayuu u baxay wuxuuna bilaabay inuu raadiyo asxaabtiisa."
Halka weedhani ay gudbinayso macne aasaasi ah, saamaynta ay ku leedahay akhristaha sidoo kale waa aasaas. Adigoo ku daraya luqadda tilmaanta ee qaab tilmaanta iyo tilmaanta, Waxaan si dhakhso leh oo waxtar leh ugu dari karnaa jumlada sawir:
"Harry waxa uu ka soo baxay albaabka hore, isagoo gadaashiisa ka xidhay. Wadnuhu waa kacday markii uu xaafadda ku dhex orday isaga oo si hamuun leh u raadinayo saaxiibbadiis.”
In xukunka dib loo eegay, Waxaan aragnaa sharraxaadyo noo sheegaya ma aha oo kaliya ficilka dhacaya, laakiin sidoo kale waxay naga caawinaysaa inaan dareemno dareenka jilaha, arrin muhiim ah oo ka mid ah sheekada.
Habka kale ee ugu wanaagsan ee sheeko ama maansada looga dhigi karo mid waxtar leh waa in lagu daro luqad maanso ah, sida tusaaleyaal. Similes waa isbarbardhig loo isticmaalo sida ama sida loo isticmaali karo si looga caawiyo akhristaha inuu qiyaaso waxa dhacaya si cad.
For example, ilmahaagu waxa laga yaabaa inuu wax u qoro:
Aad ayaan u farxay!
Waxay ahayd mid aad u qurux badan!
Aad buu u baqay!
Waxaan ku dari karnaa tusaalayaal si ay gacan uga geystaan abuurista natiijo ka sii fiican:
Waxaan u farxay sidii bisad ku jirta dukaanka dunta.
Waxay ahayd mid qurux badan sida panda ilmo oo ku ciyaaraya barafka.
Wuxuu u baqay sidii bakayle oo hadda uun maqlay yeey qaylo ah.
Taladayada kama dambaysta ah ee qoraalka sharraxaadda waa in aan dooranno eray bixin si sax ah u gudbinaysa waxa qoraagu rabo in akhristuhu dareemo.. Badanaa, ardaydu waxay qori doonaan sharraxaadyo aan caddayn, weedho sida:
Aad buu u daalay.
Filimku wuxuu ahaa mid caajis ah.
Aad bay u qabow ahaayeen.
Qolka oo aad u kulul.
Mar labaad, weedhahani waxay gudbinayaan macne fudud, laakiin qoraal qeexan, taasi kuma filna. Sharaxaad wax ku ool ah waxay isticmaashaa eray bixin saamayn leh, taasna waxaynu ku gaadhi karnaa inagoo dooranayna kaliya erayada ugu wanagsan si loo gudbiyo macnaha ugu saxan.
Eeg sida aynu jumladaha sare uga qaadan karno kuwa caadiga ah una qaadan karno kuwa aan caadi ahayn anagoo ku beddelayna qayb ka mid ah jumlada erayo awood leh:
Wuu daalay.
Filimku wuxuu ahaa mid aan mala awaal ahayn.
Waa la qaboojiyey ilaa lafta.
Qolku wuu dubay.
Warka fiicani waa in ilmahaagu aanu u baahnayn inuu ku tiirsanaado aqoonta ereyada ee hadda si uu ugu guuleysto abuurista jumlado la mid ah kuwa sare. Thesaurus-ku wuxuu leeyahay dhammaan ereyada ay u baahan yihiin si ay u abuuraan sharraxaad xusuus leh.
Waxaan rajeyneynaa in talooyinkan ay ahaayeen kuwo waxtar leh! Haddii aad jeclaan lahayd in ilmahaagu barto sida xirfadahan loogu dhaqmo mid ka mid ah barayaashayada xiisaha leh, la soco ogeysiisyada soo socda ee ku saabsan koorsooyinka xagaaga iyo dayrta cusub!
Todobaadka soo socda, waanu eegi doonaa talooyinka qoraal ee qanciya!
